Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Bracket Challenge

My final four favorite animated poems are Tornado Child, Nights on Planet Earth, Weighing In, and Lake Echo, Dear.

My final two were Tornado Child and Nights on Planet Earth.  I liked the repetition of the line "I am a tornado child" and the darkness and intensity of that poem.  In "Nights on Planet Earth" I like the descriptive words for the aspects of nature because they are thought provoking and interesting.

The final poem that won the bracket challenge was Tornado Child because I like the story it tells and the deep feelings it shows.

Tornado Child by Kwame Dawes

Thursday, May 5, 2011

3 Minute Fiction: Friendly Skies

http://www.npr.org/2011/03/25/134795550/friendly-skies

I like this story about a flight attendant who meets a pilot on a loud and uncomfortable airplane ride.  The two share some meaningless conversation and misunderstand each other and go their separate ways at the end.  I liked the way I could picture the characters even though there was hardly any description of each of them.  I pictured the flight attendant with her bloodshot eyes and a wrinkly uniform because she is going through a hard time in her life.  I pictured the pilot to be an attractive man in his blue and silver uniform that didn't match the pilots of that plane ride.  In this 3-minute short story, a lot was said about each of the characters and I found myself wanting them to be able to talk to one another and I was frustrated with the chaos of the complaining people on the plane because it prohibited the two passengers from carrying on a simple conversation that could have been something more.